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02 June 2008 @ 05:27 pm
My little scenelet rewrite has jumped from 400 words to 1400. Now, I know it was short (that's why I'm rewriting it in the first place) but STILL! I kept trying to shorten it up as I went, but after giving into the inevitable, decided I should write it out as long it wants to be and then trim it afterward.

Why is it the stories I WANT to keep going and finish don't, and the stories which are already long enough are inspired by rabid muses? :\

ETA: OTOH, thank you, story and muses, for making me re-watch Downloaded.

Also, Hilliard was most def a C Buc (which I thought, but I'd forgotten there was a reason I thought that), since he has the same outfit as Sam. And Jean probably was - she has an insignia jacket (though in grey, not black) and her shirt is in their colors reversed. She might have been a coach or trainer of some kind, not necessarily a player, but she was involved in the team (unless she's just borrowing the clothes, of course...)

The 'C-Bucs Rule' bumper sticker is forever a thing of beauty.
entertaining in a disturbing waylyssie on June 3rd, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
AHAHA. Because! That's why. ;]
lizardbeth: Anders - cross outlizardbeth_j on June 3rd, 2008 02:16 am (UTC)
as good a reason as any, I guess!
The Proverbial Bull in a China Shop...: Truccosabaceanbabe on June 3rd, 2008 02:15 am (UTC)
It's fate, screwing you in the details. :P

Not that I'm complaining, 'cause the longer that fic, the better, IMHO. Yes.
lizardbeth: Helo - Anderslizardbeth_j on June 3rd, 2008 02:27 am (UTC)
Ha, you say that, not knowing I'm going to send it to you! ;)

I never realized how much frakkin dialogue is in that scene until I tried to do my own version. gah.
The Proverbial Bull in a China Shop...: Yay!sabaceanbabe on June 3rd, 2008 02:29 am (UTC)
Ha and HA! I was hoping you'd say that. :P